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有幸拜读过最初版本和润色后的版本。楼主对文字的打磨还是非常认真的，尤其是心理活动和细节描写，有古风之韵，值得学习。佘赛花是个yy已久的角色，影视剧中不管是中年熟妇，还是老太君形象，都充满了玷污欲和征服欲。楼主也是认真揣摩了角色，才能写得如此有血有肉。


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